Markings on Your Papers

English instructors use several approaches (all valid) in reading and marking students' papers.  One instructor may mark in the correction needed (disadvantage:  the teacher is doing the work of the student); another instructor may mark, say, "CS" for "comma splice" (disadvantage:  the student has to learn the abbreviations or look them up in a chart); a third teacher may use chapter numbers from the textbook to identify problems, such as "3" in Harbrace for comma splices or run-ons (disadvantage: the student has to look up the numbers).  A teacher who isn't worth his or her salt will simply put A-, B+, C- on a paper and not put any comments or marks.
 
Harbrace Chapter
 Problem 
Equivalent Chapter in English Simplified
(under construction)
1
Sentence and Its Parts
   
2
Fragment, Incomplete Sentences
   
3
Comma Splices, run-ons
PUT A PERIOD.
   
4a
4b
4c
Adverbs
Adjectives
Comparitives, Suplerlatives
   
5
Case
   
6
Agreement
   
7
Verb Form
   
8b
8d
Proper format
Proofreading
   
9a-e
9f
Capitalization
Unnecessary caps.
   
10
Italics/underlining
   
11a-f
11g-h
Abbreviations
Use of numbers
   
12
Comma usage
   
13
Unnecessary commas (also any other punct. mark)
   
14
Semicolon
   
15
15d
Apostrophes
Misuse of apostrophes
   
16
16a(3)
Quotation marks
Quotes w/in quotes
   
17a
17b
17c
17d
17e
17f
17g
17h
17i
Period
Question Mark
Exclamation
Colon
Dash (use two hyphens)
Parentheses
Brackets
Slash
Ellipsis points (3 periods)
   
18a
18e
18g
Spelling
Plurals (suffixes)
Hyphenation
   
19
Good usage
   
20a
20b
20c
Exact word choice
Use of idiom
Fresh lang. vs. cliches
   
21
21c
Wordiness
Repetition of words
   
22
Omissions
   
23
23c
23d
Alignment
Mixed metaphors, etc.
Faulty predication
   
24
24c
Subordination
Excessive subordination
   
25
25b
Misplaced parts
Dangling modifiers
   
26
Parallelism
   
27
Avoiding shifts in tense, mood, person, number, direct & indirect discourse, tone & style, perspective, etc.
   
28
Pronoun reference
   
29
 

29d

Emphasis (the musical chapter--beginning and ending strong)
Use active, not passive verbs
   
30
Variety (avoiding monotony)
   
31
31a
31b
31c
31d
Paragraph
Topic sentence
Coherence
Details & examples
Revising
   
32
32c
32d-f
The whole paper
The thesis (focus)
Putting thoughts together
   
33
Polishing the paper
   
GU
p.743
 

p. 744

p. 745
 

p. 746
p. 750
 
 

p. 751

p. 752
p. 753

p. 754

Glossary of Usage
A vs. AN
ACCEPT vs. EXCEPT
ADVICE vs. ADVISE
AFFECT vs. EFFECT
ALOT; ALREADY vs. ALL READY
ALRIGHT
AMONG/BETWEEN
AND ETC.
ANYONE, ETC.
DIFFER FROM/WITH
DIFFERENT THAN/FROM
ETC.
FEWER/LESS
GET
GOOD/WELL
HANGED/HUNG
LIKE/AS